I like the Title

filled star filled star filled star star unfilled star unfilled
brittany363 Avatar

By

I would prefer a better cover design that matched more the of atmosphere of the book. I also feel like the description kind of described too much of the book. For mystery books, it is better to say less about the books so the reader could be more surprised. Such as mentioning the girlfriend in the description, it could've become a plot twist if it wasn't in the description.