Very enticing
Right away I wanted to know what was going on. I did get a big confused about the characters with the switching timelines, but that was an issue with me, I think, and not with the writing.
The characters are interesting, and the plot is engrossing. I read faster and faster, wanting to know exactly what was going to happen, and who it was going to happen to.
The characters are interesting, and the plot is engrossing. I read faster and faster, wanting to know exactly what was going to happen, and who it was going to happen to.