Poor Writing
I absolutely love Science Fiction books, however this little bit was not intriguing at all. There was too much back and forth to the point I couldn't follow who the book is supposed to be about. There were also a lot of confusing parts where it jumped from one idea to another.
I think the general idea and premise of the book is good, it's just not written out very well.
I think the general idea and premise of the book is good, it's just not written out very well.