Not close to Never Let Me Go

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This book was compared to “Never Let Me Go,” one of my favorite books, so I was excited to check out the sample and had high expectations. Unfortunately, it didn’t come close. I had a hard time getting past the mass amount of run-on sentences to get into the story beginning. I don’t know about any character enough to know if I’d be interested in their story. It’s dense for the sake of being dense, it feels like, when some simple edits would make it a lot stronger. It has potential but needs work to be readable to me.