Interesting with Strong Writing
The beginning of the story hooks you with its adventurous language as the narrator dreams of flight. It makes you wonder what the significance of the dream will have in the rest of the story, especially as it features a man at the end. Will this be a future love interest in a far off land?
Although Keelin is young, she sounds mature for her age and has a no-nonsense attitude. She is a dreamer, but she also seems able to defend herself. I liked her character just from the introduction and would like to read more from her perspective.
The author writes beautifully, with enough description, but also keeps the story rolling. I would enjoy reading how Keelin's story unveils as the book progresses.
Although Keelin is young, she sounds mature for her age and has a no-nonsense attitude. She is a dreamer, but she also seems able to defend herself. I liked her character just from the introduction and would like to read more from her perspective.
The author writes beautifully, with enough description, but also keeps the story rolling. I would enjoy reading how Keelin's story unveils as the book progresses.