Not going to work for everybody. I think this should be reworked into a middle grade book. The cover is terribly unappealing, and the plot/writing juvenile. It will probably not work as a YA or adult fiction. It reminds me of something like Captain Underpants. If it was redone in this vein, like a silly middle grade about a group in the nature having misadventures/adventures, then it would probably be a better bet. Change the cover whatever you do because this one is unappealing and a bit confusing