The cover is busy, words over top of the picture; in the same color scheme; makes it hard to read the title. The pictures that are apparently scattered throughout the book are real nice. Maps seem to be ok.
I try to like fantasy, I real do. But...
This story seems to not know where is wants to go. It is convoluted with what I can guess are footnotes of Christian Mythology. It slows the story.
When they speak, it is in Old English. But when the author is being descriptive it seem to be modern. The story does jump time frames without warning. Maybe as the story continues that levels off.
Some may enjoy the story. I will not be in the raffle, letting those who like the first look to have a chance to win.
I try to like fantasy, I real do. But...
This story seems to not know where is wants to go. It is convoluted with what I can guess are footnotes of Christian Mythology. It slows the story.
When they speak, it is in Old English. But when the author is being descriptive it seem to be modern. The story does jump time frames without warning. Maybe as the story continues that levels off.
Some may enjoy the story. I will not be in the raffle, letting those who like the first look to have a chance to win.