Creepy, kind of funny, but the excerpt is out of order and I think missing a page?

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So this excerpt is not in order so you had to scroll around a bit and I think I missed something there. But what I did read was very cool and kind of creepy. Basically there are at least two Blackfoot Indians who are inexplicably haunted by elk. I know in bald statement that sounds basically, well, stupid in the extreme. But it’s very cool. The two perspectives in this excerpt give you their running internal monologue and their thoughts are all about the past, their lives, their friends and family, etc. It says a lot of interesting stuff about the struggles of being a Native American that provide an cool backdrop to the situation. It seems a bit like final destination in the way this mysterious elk stuff seems to come to kill each one. But it’s both creepy and not. Suspenseful horror rather than blood and gore and clowns type horror. The concept all together is very well done and intriguing. The writing launches you straight into the ethos of the protagonist thinking at the time. I can’t wait to read more.