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Okay this is so not my thing, but it could be good if its your thing.. The story seems well written so it is not a bad read, that is not the problem for me. This is just not anywhere near my wheelhouse and doesn't interest me at all so, it is hard to hold my interest. But if the blurb interest you, this could have much promise.