I'm already somewhat intrigued as to what genre this exactly fits into. It has a lot going on already in terms of tone/vibe. I'm curious to see where this goes in terms of mystery and cop procedural.
I don't love the dialogue, though. It feels forced or off somehow? Possibly something you could get used to as you get further?
I don't love the dialogue, though. It feels forced or off somehow? Possibly something you could get used to as you get further?