A compelling opening. The setting is clear as if I were there, and the characters well-drawn. There are some lovely phrases in metaphor that enhance, rather than burden, the narrative.
I am eager to read the rest of the story!
As a taroist myself, I'm interested to find out how the card ties in to it all.
I am eager to read the rest of the story!
As a taroist myself, I'm interested to find out how the card ties in to it all.