Couldn't get past the writing style

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I think this book has an amazing premise and the story itself sounds spectacular! However, I couldn't get past the writing style when reading the first look. All the sentences were short and abrupt and it made me focus on that more than the actual words themselves. This is probably a "me problem" but it made it hard for me to focus.