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This introduction is supposed to get reader to understand how the author came to learn about this topic. The writing comes across as rambling. He vaguely introduces a character and their issue only to move onto the next one. I was not able to get into the story, even though this is a nonfiction work. It took a while for the writer to get his point across, and make an impact on me to want to read more.