Could've gotten to the action faster

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Initially when I was reading the prologue, I kept thinking where was the action because the prologue is meant to be a cliffhanger and hook you into the story. The action didn't come soon enough for me but when it reached that point, it was pretty good. I think the level of details, adjectives, and descriptions were unnecessary if it's the prologue and not the first chapter. Then the intensity of the story drops in chapter one so it's hard to know how quickly we will reenter action again.