This bears too much resemblance to a guilty-pleasure Lifetime movie where the 'hunky' guy with pecs and abs of steel is all over the girl. Typically you don't start a book with a sex scene -- even implied -- rather, you work up to that tension. Much of the dialogue is cliched and predictable. We really need to stop this trend of the alpha-male obsessed with a woman (that the reader is supposed to pretend to be) and who somehow gives us value in his fixations (think 'Twilight' and '50 Shades').