Hackles Up
The preview of this book is really short, so all it really seems to do is prove the lead character isn't afraid to go toe-to-toe with anyone, anywhere. In this case, it's a bar full of men who think women are best docile and pretty. This start is okay, but it doesn't draw me in and I really hate when writers use incomplete sentences, even if it is to set a feel for a character and their personality.