Descriptions are too broken up

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The title and cover really caught my interest. Wish the first look was longer. All we got was the main character being badass and playing pool. It was all so cliched. I didn’t like her from the start, I could already tell. I kept hoping someone would beat her up. I’m not sure if it was the author trying too hard or just me. For some reason, I’m not crazy about a chick riding a motorcycle in my books because they all follow the same pattern. I’m sure it was going to get really good when she left with a guy. Maybe we would see how she beat him up or whatever she does to them. But we only got 5 pages to look at and were just getting to that point. The descriptions are too choppy with the word “I” at the beginning of almost every one. It could’ve been blended a little better.