This was enjoyable and glad I finished, it took me awhile just cause unfortunately I have a lot going on life wise and for that I’m major sorry about.
But that being said, a chapter or so here and there we made it through. The story was unique enough to be enjoyable that you want to know more, while also having moments you sorta get lost in the words and it feels like you’re swimming against a current if that makes sense.
I felt characters were hit or miss you either really clicked with them or it was a kiss and I just couldn’t be bothered feeling invested with some of the others.
The world build was solid, you get the lay of the land , how things are, what’s the rules. I am curious if this being the start of a series, just needed to lay the ground work and once the sequels release it will buffer onto this story and flourish a bit better.
Small rocky start but definitely holds promise.
But that being said, a chapter or so here and there we made it through. The story was unique enough to be enjoyable that you want to know more, while also having moments you sorta get lost in the words and it feels like you’re swimming against a current if that makes sense.
I felt characters were hit or miss you either really clicked with them or it was a kiss and I just couldn’t be bothered feeling invested with some of the others.
The world build was solid, you get the lay of the land , how things are, what’s the rules. I am curious if this being the start of a series, just needed to lay the ground work and once the sequels release it will buffer onto this story and flourish a bit better.
Small rocky start but definitely holds promise.