not a great start

filled star filled star star unfilled star unfilled star unfilled
alysa_h Avatar

By

There are good ideas and potentially good characters, and the writing is not bad, but I just could not get past the opening sections being one giant descriptive Info Dump. Complex fantasy world-building works a lot better for me when it's organically woven into the story, not thrown up like a thick wall you have to drill through before you can even get to the story.