A bit to tell-y for me

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There's lots of wonderful description in this, but unfortunately I found it difficult to get invested when the text kept referencing back to the past. I wanted to know more how Lexi was feeling and what she was doing than knowing what everything looked like. For me I just need a bit more action off the bat with a fantasy book.