Intriguing Promise to Replenish
While there is a lot to recommend for surprising plot developments and many moving smoothly along character awakenings, there are also many improbable challenges.
Father Frederico is an amazing addition, not only for his graphic sexual exploits and teachings for the young men and their newly aroused partners, but for his backstory concerning his own father and the Catholic Church. It would have been welcome to learn exactly the content of his religious teachings to a young Muslim man.
As well, what were Aisha's thoughts about everything?
Details about characters could be better revealed by dialogue than by the narrator telling readers in somewhat stilted language, with many cliche's.
Natalia taking a chance on walking alone next to dangerous kibbutz?
David not feeling that he was set up with Rasheeda?
Natalia not communicating for decades?
Why plot so dependent on being very, very rich?
And way, way too many easy female orgasms!
Reader Alert: do NOT read the back cover - it gives away too much of the story,
presenting the entire plot including the ending!
Father Frederico is an amazing addition, not only for his graphic sexual exploits and teachings for the young men and their newly aroused partners, but for his backstory concerning his own father and the Catholic Church. It would have been welcome to learn exactly the content of his religious teachings to a young Muslim man.
As well, what were Aisha's thoughts about everything?
Details about characters could be better revealed by dialogue than by the narrator telling readers in somewhat stilted language, with many cliche's.
Natalia taking a chance on walking alone next to dangerous kibbutz?
David not feeling that he was set up with Rasheeda?
Natalia not communicating for decades?
Why plot so dependent on being very, very rich?
And way, way too many easy female orgasms!
Reader Alert: do NOT read the back cover - it gives away too much of the story,
presenting the entire plot including the ending!