I like that we are given a list of Characters and Places to assist in the reading experience. It is always good to have a frame of reference in a story that could potentially get complex.
Within the first two paragraphs of the Prologue, the writing a bit repetitive where we learn that Kareem 'rarely socialized' and 'kept to himself.' I feel that this is going to be an important aspect of his character.
Overall, the writing is easy to read and I think this will be a good story.
Within the first two paragraphs of the Prologue, the writing a bit repetitive where we learn that Kareem 'rarely socialized' and 'kept to himself.' I feel that this is going to be an important aspect of his character.
Overall, the writing is easy to read and I think this will be a good story.