The POVs from all the different staff/students add some dimension, but the First Look overall isn't that great
The "statements" from all the different staff and students at the beginning was a nice touch, but I found it rather confusing. Urban Promise Prep School, Mercy Academy, I don't know what that means! I don't see how this will relate. Are they expecting us as the reader to solve the murder case?
The one paragraph of the actual story at the end did clear some parts up, although it still wasn't that great.
The one paragraph of the actual story at the end did clear some parts up, although it still wasn't that great.