News always gets someone's attention

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I think it was very clever the way the book starts out ; its always the first few pages that make or break whether or not I am interested in reading more . I felt like there were a lot of filler pages . Between the "breaking News" page and the next actual reading page , I personally felt like it was unnecessary and got me un-interested fast . Writing lacked for me . I do not particularly enjoy when a run on sentence is broken down, feels like periods were just thrown in places . Overall just not for me .