Goodness, I do not know what to make of this one! The first bit had me a bit bored if I am being honest, and I didn't feel particularly connected. But then when we got to the "Before" part, it did start to pique my interest a bit more. I just don't know how invested I will be in the rest of the story. But it definitely seems well written and I do think it will have an audience, even if it doesn't end up being me.