Lacks Cohesiveness

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Keynan the poetry master seems to ramble from one thing to the next as this story begins. I found the author’s way of setting up the story and giving background to be frustrating. I have yet to have any feelings of liking or disliking for the main character. He’s just there with his rhyming ways and aversion to Peerless, the school he has been accepted into. This story isn’t for me. Maybe it would be for the younger set.