Awww, this story is so cute. Jonah is so fast to fall in love with Max, so bold to instantly take action, and so brave to actually go through with it. How many of us ordinary people wish there was a "Jonah" that we met while grocery shopping that would initiate something and make our boring shelter-in-place life more interesting? I bet many people have daydreamed about this and it's so funny to see a story make it all come to life. Really fun to read first impression!