The first SENTENCE just BLEW me away, haha. I just love that the story starts right away and doesn't beat around the bush, it honestly drew me in right away and made me want to find out more. I was GENUINELY drawn in within the first page or two. WOW.
I was already very worried for the main character when she was struggling, and I wanted to see and find out it she would make it. Well, more like HOW she would make it. Also, there is a LOTTTT of detail describing atmosphere and scene and the room and even how the MC felt, but I really loved the way it was described and I think it added to the mystery of wanting to know MORE, but also made me satisfied that I KNEW, kinda, what was going on. She was also described to be like an AVERAGE girl, more or less, and I felt like would be friends with her. It made me feel like, "OH yeah, I definitely want to hear her story!"
I was already very worried for the main character when she was struggling, and I wanted to see and find out it she would make it. Well, more like HOW she would make it. Also, there is a LOTTTT of detail describing atmosphere and scene and the room and even how the MC felt, but I really loved the way it was described and I think it added to the mystery of wanting to know MORE, but also made me satisfied that I KNEW, kinda, what was going on. She was also described to be like an AVERAGE girl, more or less, and I felt like would be friends with her. It made me feel like, "OH yeah, I definitely want to hear her story!"