Needs more action

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During the first half of this book, I was convinced I would give it 4.5 stars. I was really liking it, and many other people that read this book gave me such high hopes for it, but the last 100 pages of this book had me desperately trying to push through so I do not DNF it. I felt like everything was out of order and don't even get me started of Rielle constantly thinking about another when she with the boy she loved since was little. It's like the author got tired of writing it and just flung her characters into situations without thinking whether it's realistic or explained enough. However, there are moments when the girls are very cool and blowing things up around those that think little of them. Even though Eliana was not a ray sunshine I really loved her character and enjoyed her point of view the best. All in all the book was good but I think there are just somethings that need to be added to make to amazing.