A little choppy, but I couldn't stop reading

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The writing was a little choppy, it felt like the scenes didn't have a natural flow throughout them. We kind of jumped around a little bit. However, I couldn't stop reading. I had to know what happened next. The storyline is intriguing, it kind of grabs you and forces your curious mind to find out what truly happened. I feel like the mystery is already hinted at. I don't quite see how this will turn into a romance based on the first look. The story has potential, but it is missing quality. I don't know if it is going to live up to the idea behind it.