Forgettable

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This had all the basic necessary elements of a story: plot, characters, world building. It had all the hallmarks of YA Fantasy: romance, backstory, magic. There was nothing stunning. Some dragons, some healing powers, some fight scenes, some insanity, a prophecy or two. I didn't like Darling. I didn't hate her either. She's a fighter, but she's ready for peace. Her family's dead, but she's been adopted. She was kind of like Katniss without angst. Her character didn't really commit to a single stereotype, but she still wasn't a unique, complex character. Talon had the same problem. He was responsible, but not very cunning, and he dealt with too much court politics for that to work out well for him. I got bored. Their romance wasn't instalove, but there wasn't much buildup either. Talon and Darling both like each other from the get-go, they just don't realize it. At one point Darling thinks, "Why am I not disgusted by the thought of kissing Talon?" And she's had about two conversations with him.
The plot was meh. It didn't work as a Romeo and Juliet because Romeo and Juliet are supposed to be helpless; victims of circumstance. Talon and Darling have an extraordinary amount of control over their lives. There was also some court politics, conspiracies, prophecies, plot twists. Nothing really surprised me. Meh.