Nice start
I think it was a nice start overall. To be honest though, I'm not typically interested in dragon/kracken stories--it's just not something that draws me in.
I will say though, I like that the story opened in an intriguing way, and I would like to read more to see where it goes.
I will say though, I like that the story opened in an intriguing way, and I would like to read more to see where it goes.