I'm sort of iffy on this...I would need to read more.

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I'll be completely honest, I couldn't even read this. The story seemed extremely interesting and I liked it, but the sex description, totally not needed. Maybe if the first look started in the beginning vs starting at chapter 5, the sex wouldn't seem so random and would have made more sense to me.