Transitions are weird

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My first impression is that the prologue is more gripping than the rest of the story so far. And I get it; you need a hook to draw people on. I just feel that the drastic change from the tone of the prologue to the first chapter left me feeling a little whiplashed and lacking. That prologue does leave me wanting to know what happened though!