Intriguing from the start
I was hooked by the first paragraph. Very descriptive and detailed. Sounds very intriguing. Can't wait to read this creepy, exciting story. All the senses were used in the description. And what the heck were they doing in an elementary school? What happened? I want to know.
And then, some romance. I love romantic thrillers.
And then, some romance. I love romantic thrillers.