Sounds like a good story!
I really like the family aspects of the story. It is always fun in a story when you have that because I like having my own close family. I don't know a lot of Spanish, but it is definitely interesting to learn it as I am reading. I also like the characters, they seem like they would be interesting to see how they find their happiness. I am not a big fan of third person though, even though I know it is used a lot, but for romance I don't enjoy it as much as first person, so that is a negative for my own personal taste.