Admittedly, Scott's first impression of his eventual love interest feels just this side of "love at first sight". That and his inner thoughts about how to actively give attention to a woman after first being (however slightly) involved with another, doesn't necessarily make him a protagonist I would be interested in following.
On the positive side, the writing style flows well, you feel carried along with the story. And there is definitely a sense of place. The cover also matches the theme/tone of the story well.
On the positive side, the writing style flows well, you feel carried along with the story. And there is definitely a sense of place. The cover also matches the theme/tone of the story well.