Needed more world-building

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Alright, so this isn't about the book itself, but can I start by just saying how beautiful the cover art on this one is?

Right off the bat, Woven in Moonlight thrusts you into a magical world and conflict. Unfortunately, it all felt a little *too* abrupt to me. A lot of names and terms were thrown out just in the first dozen or so pages with little explanation. There simply wasn't enough world-building to have much sense of what was happening to get too invested in it. I found myself continuously wanting more--to dig deeper into the world we are supposed to be peaking into. Tell me who these characters are and why they matter. Tell me about the place they are living in and how we got there.