Suspense from the start

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The first scene is set on a train. Although it seems harmless, there is an omninus feeling through the first several pages. This feeling of suspense lingers and a tightness in the chest begins to form. Page by page, the threat grows stronger, patience starts to dwindle so the reading gets faster and faster, the yerning for the threat is building.....