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It's an interesting story with interesting characters, but I keep getting bogged down because I can't tell what the time period it is occurring in. The writing leads me to think that it is contemporary, however, the surroundings make me think that this is historical. The confusion is effecting the way that I read the novel and making me not able to pay attention. I think this needs to be addressed in a Foreword or something.