Okay, but not for me
The writing was okay, but nothings about the blurb or sample pulled me in or made me want to read more. The cover was okay, but again, if I passed it in a bookstore, it wouldn't grab me enough to buy it. And, it may seem minor, but Sunday and Kale for first names? I had a hard time looking past the vegetable to connect. There's nothing wrong with using average names.