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Jenny Bell recreated herself when moving to New York City so that no one would know about her past; however, it seems her past may be catching up to her.

Honestly this writing style is one that makes me want to skim read, it is very detailed and flowery...which to me translates to wordy. I think it will take a decent amount of time to get to the plot and by that point I may not even be interested in the story. This is just a personal opinion, the story does seem like it would be intriguing and I can see a lot of people loving it.