Wow! This excerpt is so well-written and made me want to keep reading! The opening scene immediately pulled me into the story. The author portrayed Blake’s inner thoughts and feelings in such a realistic way. The main themes—peer pressure, self-doubt, and alcohol addiction—are all connected and have the potential to escalate quickly. I am curious about the Serena Society and would like to learn more about Blake and Ella’s relationship. Blake believes she must impress both her girlfriend and the president of the Serena Society, Roxanne, to achieve a sense of belonging. But something tells me this could be just the beginning of her problems. The story is captivating so far, and I’d like to see where it goes.
The cover design is beautiful and fits the story well. I especially like the colors. The title really stands out.
The cover design is beautiful and fits the story well. I especially like the colors. The title really stands out.