This is definitely an intriguing start to a story! Everyone's a suspect, you can't trust anyone, and you don't know exactly what's going on. It's the perfect setup for a murder mystery. I'm not quite so interested in all the asides from the main character where she's like 'oh i see the past and future and present all at once but i have to remember to constrain myself for this narrative.' I find it a bit annoying. But overall she's an interesting main character.