Someone's plotting something...

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Straight away I liked the dual perspectives between the two female characters as it helps to quickly develop both characters and shows their motivations. The writing is descriptive enough to provide clear settings and mannerisms between then, developing them into characters with their own voices. It sounds like one of them is plotting something and I'm eager to see where this goes.