Draws You In
The Whisper Man draws you in from the first sentence. You know something bad is going to happen, and as you wait for it, it's like watching a slow-motion train wreck (this is a good thing, because the train wreck is happening to the characters, not the story, and you have to know what happens next.
This story looks like it has a lot of promise.
This story looks like it has a lot of promise.