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Not sure on this one - the narrative didn't flow well for me - felt choppy and awkward. I didn't get the whole genie joke in the elevator - it didn't make sense and was weird. Also don't think the Pretty Woman reference fit. Maybe I'm just not getting the humor. I feel there could be promise in the characters and the story, but not sure I could get through an entire book in the writing style.