You lost me at the talking birds
Loved the design of the cover and internal pages, especially the prologue/explanation of the world. It felt very origins of the Ten Commandments. I also love Teo's voice, but it's Aiden Thomas, so of course I'd love the voice. However, I'm not super interested in the world and I do not like birds and they play such a big role. Like, they TALK. No thanks.