Lively and inspired but kind of a chaotic start.

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First thing- the cover is nice, I like the art style and use of color. Cute and would stand out a lot amidst more plain designs. I like the overall ideas behind this fantasy series and how far-reaching they are but the first two chapters are just a rush of too many characters, a ton of things going on and it all borders on confusing. Future chapters will hopefully weave the storyline in a cohesive way.