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The first sentence grabs me and it does not lose me. Those first 7 pages are shocking, how the scene unfolds and you are left wondering what happens next. Then it seems to go into a completely different story. Again, I am engaged in the story and I am hoping to find out how it complements the original story it started out with. This is a page turner and I hope it keeps a steady pace.